Message #68

[Dypo]

It felt a bit rushed, but was good nonetheless. I only have a few minor issues to point out:
- Sometimes, you suddenly used present/past tense, and changed back.
- Just a reminder: Bold isn't <b> </b> here. It's [ b ] [ / b ] (remove the spaces).
- Earlier, you said that Christian and Shawn would die in this story. But I presume that'll be in the sequel?
- It's to "wait for", not to "wait on".